Alex Horton A2

Alterations for our Final Draft Our feedback from our second draft of our trailer suggested that we needed to make some minor tweaks to the sound of our trailer to make it more cohesive and to also consider our colour pallet in more detail.  For our final draft we altered the sound, cutting out a section of the scripting where the narrative seemed to dwindle slightly. We also make some slight colour corrections to add to the professional feel of the trailer and then, briefly, added a shot of a black paint stroke swiping across a finished painting. This shot had previously been cut out of our trailer as we made alterations to our storyboard. However, we were sorry to see it go so decided to reintroduce it to our piece.

It is def looking better and you’ve taken on board you’re feedback so well done. Now let’s sort the sound. Still consider a more emotional re-record, and chop/layer the sound. As you’re using copyright free music, keep trawling and see if there’s anything else there.  From Miss Page, also consider whether you have a colour palette and how you can emphasise this. Especially if it is an art related trailer!